I need feed back on a Warlord Npc

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My Npc is the Overlord of the Pittsburgh,s warlords

Hit-Hard:Ben Hardson
Alignment:Aberrant
Descripion:African American man of 25

Morphus:Look like a living statue of steel

Talents:Anti-arcans,Lightning rider and Shadow blast

Back story:A African American family found him im 1950,His becoming happed in 1973 he join a African American gang but keeps his powers secret In 2000 he leds it and was Contact by Chow-down and become the Over-lord of Pittsburgh.
The Majorty of normal humans in the gang are African American but he also recruited other Nightbane,Psychics and magic-users.

Disponsition:A Cold,ruthless,a Good planer but can be Charming and dipomatic Too.

He see other Nightbanes,Psychic and magic-user as a big Resources and wants them to join his gang in big numbers,he das not Care what color they are!