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Unread post by Sapphyre Dragon »

looking forward to it

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Unread post by Nikkie1476 »

Foreign Devilry,
I'm glade to see that you continued the story. Have you sent anything to Rifter yet?

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Sapphyre Dragon

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Anything new coming for this storyline?
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good job man its nice to have you on the boards
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In an RPG with deadly situations that character would have had to be replaced a dozen times over[
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Unread post by Sir_Spirit »

Um, you do write nice so don't take this the wrong way, but could you maybe start or end some where, or maybe explain something.

The ONLY reason I ask this is because you have two characters who are in the mist of travelling from point A to point B and we know little about them. They have niether left nor arrived.
YOu have a nice flow to your words and a great sense of character.
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Unread post by Lirathwen »

I agree, very good writing. I'd be very interested to see more. I love stories! :)
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