DR opener. Criticism welcome.

You are on your own. The Army is MIA and our government is gone! There are no communications of any kind. Cities and towns have gone dark, and zombies fill the streets. The dead have risen and it would seem to be the end of the world. Help me, Mommy!

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Since The Wave began you’ve known it was something more than what the media portrayed. You’ve had a sense of foreboding that has made it difficult to sleep. When you do sleep you dream of being chased by something, possibly many somethings. You pack your bail-out-bag with:
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a 1w LED Headlamp, road atlas, GPS unit, Leatherman multi-tool, 7” survival knife, flare-gun, signal mirror, Bic lighter, pack of cigarettes & 2 good cigars (even if you’re a non smoker), mylar survival blanket, roll of duct tape, first aid kit, 1litre water, 1 MRE, 8mp digital camera, your IDs, a few hundred dollars in cash, hand held CB radio, 8oz flask of your favorite spirits, a colt 1911 .45 (even if you’re not proficient in its use) 5 full mags for said colt, box of 100 extra .45 rounds, 100’ of paracord, crank powered AM/FM & short band radio, umbrella & poncho, and a solar charger for phones and iPods. About 25 Lbs of gear total.


In a backpack you have:
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a spare set of warm clothes & Day-Glo orange windbreaker, compact binoculars, 100 more rounds for the .45, 1d4+1 flashlights, batteries (1d4+2 each of AAA, AA, C, D) 6 more MREs, ½ gallon of water, UV water sterilizer, 24 chlorine tablets, Zippo lighter with 6oz extra fuel & 1d6 extra flints, mess kit and a small alcohol stove with 24 oz of 100% ethanol fuel, underneath the backpack is a tightly compressed sleeping bag, a net hammock, and 50’of 2500Lb test climbing line. About 50 Lbs of gear total


With your vehicle you have
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a leather jacket, any long guns you are proficient in and 100rds of ammo for each, any melee weapons you are proficient in, 1 gallon of water, a dozen MREs, Extra gas = to 10% of your vehicle’s normal capacity, basic mechanic’s tool kit with adjustable wrench, socket wrench, vice grips, pliers, a couple of flat and Philips head screw drivers, 20’ of bailing wire & jumper cables. The vehicle itself is equipped with an extra battery, a CB radio, and is always fully fueled and in good mechanical repair.


Of course you have know way of knowing that several total strangers have packed this exact same list of supplies, though some have added to it to take best use of their skill set.

Several days into the illness the deaths begin. The second night after the deaths start you give up sleeping and decide to leave your home and get out of town to someplace less populated… (or to be around more people if you are our farmboy) you’re not even sure which direction you should head you simply grab your gear and take to the road.

As you drive though the pre-dawn mist you feel you need to pull over not for fuel or rest but for other less tangible reasons… something’s giving you the willies. There is a cold empty feeling in the pit of your stomach and you feel sort of exposed. You’re about 2-3 miles away from the SD HWY 46 exit on US Interstate 29. You’ve been here before and know there is a truck stop/café and a cup of coffee sounds really good… maybe even steak and eggs and a slice of pie for breakfast. That will get you feeling right. First you stop and top off your gas tank and then empty your bladder. Next door is the diner.

Once you enter the diner you sit along the counter at the far end where it wraps back around by the kitchen door subconsciously seeking the warmth, against not only the chill of the early morning, but also the chill in your soul. The cook comes out though the double hinged doors and Says “I’ll be with you in a moment I’m the only one here holding down the fort because both my counter girl and waitress are both out sick… or worse.”

“Or worse” You think to yourself, yeah that pretty much sums it up.

As the cook walks back to the kitchen he reaches up and turns on a TV, that you all pretty much have your back to, and walks back thought the swinging doors.

Small talk is made amongst you. most notably about you all ordering steak and eggs, food is served and conversation continues but is slowed.

About half way through your plate of food (which was twice as much as you could have eaten in the first place) there is a silence in the conversation and a loud scream from the TV (that everyone has been ignoring purposefully) and everyone turns on their stool to look.

It’s a shot of an attractive female news station field reporter being torn apart by what appears to be a shambling mob. The image shakes wildly as the camera man runs for the news van. Suddenly the image jolts, blacks out, and then returns. The camera must be on the ground on its side, you can see a man that falls/rolls/skids onto screen from bottom to top. Just as he tries to regain his feet another person knocks him down with a brutal kick to the chest. All the while there is a moaning and a screeching coming from the speaker as well as the chants of “No no no no no” from the camera man.

Suddenly two more people grab the camera man and one of them viciously bites open his throat and cuts off his scream of “ZOMBIsssss…”

Just when the camera man goes still the moaning quits and the screen fills with shambling legs, some of which jostle and move the camera. Zombies shamble top to bottom.

The image cuts to a male anchor at a news desk that has the most wide-eyed look of shock and fear that any human could display. He is literally speechless with horror for about 7 seconds and then starts “This can’t be real, it can’t be, there is no way this is happening, It can’t happen, no way, no F***ing way!” He launches himself back from the desk and the in-studio camera man has trouble following his pell-mell escape as he streaks for the edge of the stage.

The screen goes black and the “emergency alert system” tones blare while the screen start to show a banner while the electronic voice that announces storm alerts starts explaining that “those that were thought to have died of the Wave are now arising as murderous psychopaths” and advises all citizens “to stay in their homes, not open the door to anybody and to avoid using the phone to keep circuits open for emergency calls.”

You notice that the sun has just risen and is casting a strong reddish light into the diner, in the pause before the EAS tones erupt from the speakers you think you hear moaning...
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Nice opening - I think you've got a good handle on the plot you want to start with.

Re: the survival gear and such, I'll toss out a couple suggestions based on my background in Search and Rescue and wilderness stuff. It may be of little significance, or great, depending on how you're running things, but I'd say the weights on the BOB and the backpack are a bit off. The BOB looks like it's around 25 pounds of equipment. It'd be nearer 15lbs without the gun and ammo, but those are fairly heavy (roughly 2.5 pounds for the empty gun, 0.5 ounces per bullet). On the other hand, the backpack looks like it's around 40 pounds, rather than 50. Modern backpacking and camping gear can be surpisingly lightweight while remaining entirely functional - the heavist individual thing in that whole pack is the water (though the cumulative half-case of MREs is more). A nice sleeping bag is only about 2.5 pounds, and things like a backpacking stove weigh less than a pound. I'd also suggest that the (up to) 6 flashlights is excessive in addition to the headlamp, 1 large and 1 small should be the most carried, with some lightsticks and w/p/w/p matches replacing the extras. The weights balance out to be the same, increased by 10 on BOB and decreased by 10 on pack, but in case it's relevant, I thought I'd bring it up :-)

Of course, all that depends on the idea that these kits are outfitted with professional camping gear instead of odds'n'ends from a person who doesn't know better - that could cancel everything I said and make it even heavier, instead :-P
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J. Lionheart wrote:Nice opening - I think you've got a good handle on the plot you want to start with.

Re: the survival gear and such, I'll toss out a couple suggestions based on my background in Search and Rescue and wilderness stuff. It may be of little significance, or great, depending on how you're running things, but I'd say the weights on the BOB and the backpack are a bit off. The BOB looks like it's around 25 pounds of equipment. It'd be nearer 15lbs without the gun and ammo, but those are fairly heavy (roughly 2.5 pounds for the empty gun, 0.5 ounces per bullet). On the other hand, the backpack looks like it's around 40 pounds, rather than 50. Modern backpacking and camping gear can be surpisingly lightweight while remaining entirely functional - the heavist individual thing in that whole pack is the water (though the cumulative half-case of MREs is more). A nice sleeping bag is only about 2.5 pounds, and things like a backpacking stove weigh less than a pound. I'd also suggest that the (up to) 6 flashlights is excessive in addition to the headlamp, 1 large and 1 small should be the most carried, with some lightsticks and w/p/w/p matches replacing the extras. The weights balance out to be the same, increased by 10 on BOB and decreased by 10 on pack, but in case it's relevant, I thought I'd bring it up :-)

Of course, all that depends on the idea that these kits are outfitted with professional camping gear instead of odds'n'ends from a person who doesn't know better - that could cancel everything I said and make it even heavier, instead :-P


Thanks for the heads up on the low weight on the BoB I'll change it accordingly... all my characters are over 17 PS so they really don't need to worry about it too much, but if anything I'm erroring on the side of too heavy rather than too light.

I collect flashlights and thought I would toss some of my obsession in to the mix. Plus 1d4+1 is only 2 on the bottom end (3 when you count the headlight) :)
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Thanks RPGMAN

All good advice. I had thought of the rechargable batteries and I was going with lots of battereies because they might not have time to charge them and could share with others, and less water in the vehicles because some of the people wont have cars just motorcycles, and though you could fit 4-6 gal on a bike it would limit room for other things and the backbpack is taking up the bike's back seat so the water cannot go there.
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tlazaroff wrote:Is this an opening for a campaign you're going to run?

Yes
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RPGMAN wrote:Oh - and I forgot to mention - *love* the way you got the PCs together. <cheeky grin>

Have they started yet, or are you just fleshing (heh heh) out your ideas before dropping them into it?
Glad you like it ;)
Have not started the game yet however all but one of the characters have been completed and I hope to get that done this week so we can have our first session (where this into will be used) on sunday.
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RPGMAN wrote:I think the equipment is pretty good for average to slightly above-average income person. Anyone with plenty of money (or if it is their hobby/area of interest) could get a LOT less weight and bulk for the same gear. There are alcohol stoves that weigh *grams*, technical gear and clothing that is extremely lightweight, and there's always the custom route too.


Agreed. This is clearly not a supply set put together by a person who knows about survival, nor is it by an outdoors hobbyist. It's a great representation though of what a good normal person might be able to put together in a semi-reasoned state of panic such as that induced by The Wave. As such, it seems entirely fair for a DR game as is, unless the person is playing a Survivor: Survivalist character or equivalent :-)
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J. Lionheart wrote:
RPGMAN wrote:I think the equipment is pretty good for average to slightly above-average income person. Anyone with plenty of money (or if it is their hobby/area of interest) could get a LOT less weight and bulk for the same gear. There are alcohol stoves that weigh *grams*, technical gear and clothing that is extremely lightweight, and there's always the custom route too.


Agreed. This is clearly not a supply set put together by a person who knows about survival, nor is it by an outdoors hobbyist. It's a great representation though of what a good normal person might be able to put together in a semi-reasoned state of panic such as that induced by The Wave. As such, it seems entirely fair for a DR game as is, unless the person is playing a Survivor: Survivalist character or equivalent :-)

Thanks that’s kinda what I was shooting for. Prepared for a couple of days of "roughing it" but not prepared for "I'm gonna go live in the woods for 2 months with only what I can carry on my back".
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Citizen Lazlo wrote:I like it, sounds like the opening for a fun game.

:)

:-) Thanks! I certainly hope so.
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Leon Kennedy wrote:(Ok, so the gamer in me is coming out, and I'm getting into character here...)

So I'm sitting in the diner, having a meal (of sorts), when the sirens go off and moaning starts. I have the following questions from observing my surroundings:

1. Which direction is the moaning coming from (assuming I can tell)?No you cannot its too faint
2. Has anyone in the diner fallen over and gotten back up? no most but not all the dead bodies have been taken to the morgue/hospital/undertakers only a few undiscovered ones are just lying about.
3. Besides the obvious exit (the front door), are there any other noticeable exits? There is a short breezway to the gas statation as well as doors to the outside you also think it safe to assume there is a back door since food deliveries almost NEVER come in via the front doors of resturants
4. Can I see my car from inside the diner (like through the windows), or am I parked too far away to see it clearly? Yes the whole front of the diner is glass and you can see your at least a portion of your vehicle if not the whole thing
5. Is the TV still on, or has it gone to an emergency signal too? Its on but it was what was givving the warning and its just repeating the warning
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tlazaroff wrote:hehe, I like how Leon is playing :)

I do also, to a point... But I've induldged him too much already since I'm not interested in running a play by post.

Also what fun is a game of 6 individuals? I'd personally never run such a game since its about 6 times as time consuming and rather boring for the 5 other people whos turn its not..



No offence Leon. :-D
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Leon Kennedy wrote:Pity. I was getting into it. Was hoping to keep this thread alive longer than just "well, here's the concept, critique it and move on".

Oh well. :D


Sorry to spoil your fun... :(
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tlazaroff wrote:I wish there was a place that did PBP DR. I know that Explorers Unlimited is known for their Rifts PBP, but they don't do DR.
http://explorersunlimited.com/


If you want to GM try asking NMI he has a message board that he allows PBP to be run on.
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Well today we played from 2 to about 5:30 and we did not kill any zombies. I just went along for the ride though, I ended my influence when I ended my little intro.

Immediately they take action.
They have the cook lock that back door while the hippy ganja grower knots closed the main doors.
We then go to our vehicles and get our guns and other supplies, and tell the gas station attendant (some elderly dude) what’s up.
The garbage truck driver dumps his 90% full truck onto the doors that were tied inside (somehow without breaking them) and then parks next to the diner and climbs the truck and gets on the roof of the building. There are trees blocking his view
so the hacker/thief takes off on foot to the top of the interstate overpass and looks toward the town of Beresford SD pop 2000 from which a moaning is coming from. Sees shambling zombies some naked (hey they strip you in the morgue) and books it back to the diner.
While the hacker/thief gets his recon done the other grab food and supplies from the gas station and load them into the diner's rear room.
The farm boy uses the tables to blockade the windows and the booths to prop them in.
The Soldier/Doctor got though to the nearest hospital by calling the 911 switchboard and saying he had a medical emergency. Amazingly on of their ER staff answers the phone just long enough to ID himself as a surgeon and to say that all hell had broke lose and that they needed help now. He hung up to call 911 back but he got an all circuits busy message upon repeat attempts.

The shut off the pumps and all regroup in the diner.
This all takes place in the first three minutes.

Over the next couple of minutes they listen to the hacker’s report and then decide what they want to do.

There are a few cars that zoom by and a few that swing into the diner's lot only to pull away when the see the garbage pile on the door and the window’s blocked by the tables.

The farmer offers the use of his home to get away from the town. Its about 10 miles away. Once there The soldier/doctor goes into fortification mode and uses the closet doors (solid wood) to barricade the first floor windows. He also nail shut 2 of the 3 exterior doors. Then sets up an area as a medical area for anybody who may need help.

The hacker set up his mobile satellite internet connection and tried getting info on the situation. Found out the are vulnerable to headshots decapitation and fire and that they are spreading like wild fire by that evening what reports can be found indicate that more than 60% of the population are likely zombies. They also hear that the zombies moan when they see people and will home in on the moan as a sign that food is near. He also sets up his laptop to output to an old CB that he has cranked up the wattage on and connected to the old TV aerial where they broadcast on channel 4 that they have food and supplies and can provide support and to meet them at noon tomorrow at the gas station they on the west side of the interstate 29 on SD highway 46.

My psychologist and the truck driver mount a mini pumpkin chunker (works on grapefruit of softball sized objects but can launch them about 300 yards) onto the garbage truck, remove the ram that both compacts the trash and pushes it out when the back door is raised and use it to fashion a “cattle guard” for people that can also be used to move vehicles (the ram blade weighs about 3000 lbs but the lift capacity on the forks is normally 10,000 lbs.), power washed the inside of the garbage hopper area and sprayed it down with muratic acid to sterilize it. Added bars across the windows and cut weapon holes in the sides and back of the garbage truck and mounted a few rungs to form a ladder inside the hopper to the opening which used to receive the trash.

The hippy made about 30 Molotov cocktails out of mason jars as ammo for the pumpkin chunker. He also had the farmer kill a cow and made about 100Lbs of jerky (it will be done by morning) and then out fitted some of his arrows as fire arrows and a few into mini Molotov cocktail arrows.
Also spent time trying to trap and boobytrap the area around the farm (failed his rolls but still spent hours doing it)

The farmboy goes to rescue Old Man Brown who lives about 5 miles down and has nobody else (no kids or wife around) so he feels that its safe to go there. Load up on a lot more gear and ammo (OMB had lots of 12 gauge rounds) food and get a small gasoline generator.

Just after sunset the farboy the tuck driver and the soldier/Dr decide to go back into Beresford and see how bad it is but find that the overpass is blocked by an overturned grain truck and a pileup of cars around it.

They turn around and go to the gas station and pick up the beer and soda and fresh food that they left behind before toping off their tanks (shut the pumps back off) and debate on weather or not to try to move the blocking cars now and squeeze through or to wait till morning…

Not exactly I as I would have played it but certainly safe and well thought out.
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