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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 3:27 pm
by Sapphyre Dragon
looking forward to it
Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:47 am
by Nikkie1476
Foreign Devilry,
I'm glade to see that you continued the story. Have you sent anything to Rifter yet?
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 4:59 pm
by Sapphyre Dragon
Anything new coming for this storyline?
Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:21 pm
by Prince Cherico
good job man its nice to have you on the boards
Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 9:12 am
by Sir_Spirit
Um, you do write nice so don't take this the wrong way, but could you maybe start or end some where, or maybe explain something.
The ONLY reason I ask this is because you have two characters who are in the mist of travelling from point A to point B and we know little about them. They have niether left nor arrived.
YOu have a nice flow to your words and a great sense of character.
JUSt WANTS MORE!!!!!!
Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 4:29 am
by Lirathwen
I agree, very good writing. I'd be very interested to see more. I love stories!
