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"Fleets of the Three Galaxies" - done!

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 10:38 pm
by Braden Campbell
As of Sunday, 9:30 EST, Fleets of the Three Galaxies is done. All that remains is a quick brush-up edit courtesy of my wife, Holly-Ann, and then its off to Wayne Smith.

Wayne, incidentally, had better clear off a few days to read this 84-page epic. No joke.

Fleets covers 6 space forces in the Three Galaxies (CCW, TGE, UWW, the Splugorth, Golgan, and Altess) right down to their ranks and uniforms. It also includes 15 new starships, 6 notable NPC's and a in-depth essay on realistically using space fleets.

Dear God, I hope it sees print....

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 10:51 pm
by BookWyrm
Bravo, man. Can't wait to see it.

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 11:55 pm
by DhAkael
Dude!
Don't choke! Breathe...breathe..that's it...easy does it :D
Break a leg sir!

Re: "Fleets of the Three Galaxies" - done!

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 11:59 pm
by Marrowlight
Braden, GMPhD wrote:As of Sunday, 9:30 EST, Fleets of the Three Galaxies is done. All that remains is a quick brush-up edit courtesy of my wife, Holly-Ann, and then its off to Wayne Smith.

Wayne, incidentally, had better clear off a few days to read this 84-page epic. No joke.

Fleets covers 6 space forces in the Three Galaxies (CCW, TGE, UWW, the Splugorth, Golgan, and Altess) right down to their ranks and uniforms. It also includes 15 new starships, 6 notable NPC's and a in-depth essay on realistically using space fleets.

Dear God, I hope it sees print....



Well, if not, there's always posting it as a net book yes?

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 4:03 am
by KLM
Keep us informed.

Adios
KLM

Re: "Fleets of the Three Galaxies" - done!

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 1:10 pm
by DhAkael
gadrin wrote:
Marrowlight wrote:Dear God, I hope it sees print....


Well, if not, there's always posting it as a net book yes?


I think once you turn it in, it becomes their property and may not be re-released without PB's permission.


That's about the size of it.
Once they have it...it's not your child anymore...period.

Re: "Fleets of the Three Galaxies" - done!

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 4:41 pm
by Marrowlight
DhAkael wrote:
gadrin wrote:
Marrowlight wrote:Dear God, I hope it sees print....


Well, if not, there's always posting it as a net book yes?


I think once you turn it in, it becomes their property and may not be re-released without PB's permission.


That's about the size of it.
Once they have it...it's not your child anymore...period.


Hrm, I seem to recall you used to be able to submit articles you already had on the web to the Rifter - and I didn't see where you had to then take it off your web page once you'd submitted it. Maybe the rules have just changed, or maybe I'm just nutty! :)

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 12:41 am
by Alpha 11
:ok: Good job! Hope to see it and buy it soon! :ok:

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 10:11 am
by The Galactus Kid
Is this for a serialized publication in the RIFTER or is this for a small source book?

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 12:05 pm
by Braden Campbell
I realized the other night that 84 pages is only 42 printed back to back... so maybe two 21-page installments in the Rifter...?

I have some ideas to pad it out, including a section on Trade Federations, Mercantilus Unions, and Space Pirates.

And I am trying to come up with star ship construction rules that are ballanced and fair... but it ain't easy!

All up to Mr. Smith, I suppose...

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 3:18 pm
by The Galactus Kid
Well, if you follow the submission guidelines and submit an unformatted manuscript in 10 point font, once you take in art considerations you will generally get about 2/3 of your preliminary count. So you are looking at about 60 pages once its complete. See if you can pack more into it and get a 96 page Sourcebook. Eitherway, I'm looking forward to it.

Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 3:05 am
by AzathothXy
I know I'm late on comments. And I look forward to this book, but did you think about or actually put in stats for generic ships and fleets?
Something to represent other minor races/empires/etc.? I was thinking along the lines of Wayne Breaux's 'generic' ships at the end of Aliens Unlimited. Possibly even like the ships in Galaxy guide. The AU stuff only took up two pages, and tweaked alittle for PW would work nicely.

Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 3:32 am
by Marrowlight
Actually, as another late comer comment - the mig thread got me thinking. Did you include any tech theft concepts into the submission? The CCW got access to THIS 200 years ago by stealing it from the Splugorth, etc, etc type concepts? Or is everyone basically in isolated progressive development for their gear?

Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 9:55 am
by GhostKnight
I'm looking forward to this book.

Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 6:21 pm
by Braden Campbell
did you think about or actually put in stats for generic ships and fleets?
Something to represent other minor races/empires/etc.?


I am thinking coming up with a starship creation guide that would cover this. Typical Runner, Merchant, and Pirate craft will appear in my new article, Trade Federations and Mercantillus Unions.

Did you include any tech theft concepts into the submission?


Yes. The Kittani technology is reverse engineered from the Mechanoids. The entire UWW would not exist if it weren't for the Splugorth. The CCW is building dreadnought super carriers to keep pace with the TGE (from whom they stole the engine designs). The Kreeghor have built a Phase Missile Cruiser thanks to four Prometheans who all failed their Tests of Maturity. And the Golgan are talking to themselves... ;)

Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 7:36 pm
by Gomen_Nagai
if it sees print, i'll consider buying the issue it came out in and using it in my vast arena of already made Starships in my games

Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 10:27 pm
by Marrowlight
Braden, GMPhD wrote:Yes. The Kittani technology is reverse engineered from the Mechanoids. The entire UWW would not exist if it weren't for the Splugorth. The CCW is building dreadnought super carriers to keep pace with the TGE (from whom they stole the engine designs). The Kreeghor have built a Phase Missile Cruiser thanks to four Prometheans who all failed their Tests of Maturity. And the Golgan are talking to themselves... ;)



Hrm...doesn't the Kittani bit contradict their origins there? Been a while since I've read WB2 so possibly not, but something about that tweaks my memory.

Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:02 pm
by Braden Campbell
Before becoming Splugorth minions, the Kittani fought a long and brutal war against the Mechanoids... and apparently did a great deal of damage to them before loosing.

During the conflict, I have said, they managed to reverse engineer some of the powerful beam weaponry found on Mechanoid ships (since they all have Telemechanics, this is not hard to believe).

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:01 am
by Marrowlight
Braden, GMPhD wrote:Before becoming Splugorth minions, the Kittani fought a long and brutal war against the Mechanoids... and apparently did a great deal of damage to them before loosing.

During the conflict, I have said, they managed to reverse engineer some of the powerful beam weaponry found on Mechanoid ships (since they all have Telemechanics, this is not hard to believe).



Ahh, well some technology I can see - just the way I intially read what you said, it sounded like you were saying all Kittani tech was from reverse engineering the Mechanoids.

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:41 am
by Syndicate
Nice to see that some of us aren't just sitting on our tushes...

I hope you included some type of "fuzzy" R.C.C. to counter the Star Wars "care bears"...nothing like a shoulder cannon carrying teddy-bear to add some character to the game...

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:52 am
by Josh Sinsapaugh
Took ya long enough, slow poke.

:P

((But congrats, nevertheless. :ok: ))

~ Josh

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 1:28 am
by Gomen_Nagai
i won't obey your OBEY.

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:53 am
by Braden Campbell
Josh Sinsapaugh wrote:Took ya long enough, slow poke.

:P


~ Josh


I write when I can: between preparing meals, cleaning the house, going out to playgroup... its time consuming being a stay-at-home Dad.

That and I edit my stuff many, many times.

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 9:36 pm
by Jack Daniels
Braden, GMPhD wrote:
I edit my stuff many, many times.


That'll be a welcome change if the book makes it to print.

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 10:55 pm
by Braden Campbell
It has many big words in it as well.

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 11:21 pm
by Marrowlight
Braden, GMPhD wrote:It has many big words in it as well.



Nooooo, not big words. I don't want to have to break out my Pictionary and my Thesseus :? :lol: :?

Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 1:00 am
by Jack Daniels
Marrowlight wrote:
Braden, GMPhD wrote:It has many big words in it as well.



Nooooo, not big words. I don't want to have to break out my Pictionary and my Thesseus :? :lol: :?


Did you mean to say Pictionary? Cause that's pretty funny if you did, but even funnier if you didn't.

Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 1:04 am
by Marrowlight
Jack Daniels wrote:
Marrowlight wrote:
Braden, GMPhD wrote:It has many big words in it as well.



Nooooo, not big words. I don't want to have to break out my Pictionary and my Thesseus :? :lol: :?


Did you mean to say Pictionary? Cause that's pretty funny if you did, but even funnier if you didn't.



Yeah, I did. Same reason I said Thesseus instead of Thesaurus.

Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:42 am
by Esckey
Question: Do you go into crew make up?

Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 8:50 am
by Braden Campbell
Not really. But there are ranks in the native languages of the fleet makers.